1. #1
    Nov 2010
    Cervera, Cataluna, Spain, Spain
    6,419

    Lightbulb ~ Meri Zindagi Kay Charag ~


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  2. #2
    G u L's Avatar
    ~* UZ Designer *~
    May 2012
    Pakistan
    1,269
    Wah Jeee Wah Haroon Bhai Buhat Aala, Chalo Shukar Itnay Dino Baad Kuch Dykhnay Ko To Milaa, Very Nice But Ek Cheez Haroon Bhai Ghazal Puri Nahen Hai, Puri Ghazal Jo Meray Page Pe Hai Wo Ye Hai..

    ..!| IqB@L AzeeM |!..


    Mujhe Apnay Zabt Pe Naaz Tha, Sarr-E-Bazm Raat Ye Kiya Huwa,
    Mere Aankh Kaise Chalak Parii, Mujhe Ranj Hai Ye Buraa Huwa.

    Mere Zindagi Kay Chiragh Ka, Ye Mizaaj Koi Naya Nahi,
    Kabhi Roshani Kabhi Taareeki, Na Jalaa Huwa Na Bujha Huwa.

    Mujhe Jo Bhi Dushman-E-JaaN Milaa, Wohi Pukhta Kaar-E-Jafaa Milaa,
    Na Kisi Ki Zarb Ghalat Parii, Na Kisi Ka Teer Khata Huwa.

    Mujhe Aap Kyun Na Samajh Sakay, Ye Khud Apnay DiL Say Hi Poochiye,
    Mere Dastaan-E-Hayaat Ka To, Warq Warq Hai Khula Huwa.

    Jo Nazar Bacha Kay Guzar gaye, Meray Saamnay Say Abhi Abhi,
    Ye Meray Hi Shehar Kay Log Thy, Meray Ghar Say Ghar Hai Milaa Huwa.

    Humen Is-Ka Koi Bhi Haq Nahi, Kay Shareek-E-Bazm-E-Khaloos Hun,
    Na Humaray Pas Naqaab Hai, Na Kuch Aasteen Main Chupaa Huwa.

    Meray Aik Gosha-E-Fikar Main, Mere Zindagi Say Azeez-Tarr,
    Mera Aik Aisa Bhi Dost Hai, Jo Kabhi Milaa Na Judaa Huwa.

    Mujhe Hum-Safar Bhi Milaa Koi, To Shikasta Haal Mere Tarha,
    Kayi Manzilon Ka Thaka Huwa, Kahen Raastay Main Lutaa Huwa.

    Mujhe Ek Gali Main Paraa Huwa, Kisi Bad-Naseeb Ka Khat Milaa,
    Kahen Khoon-E-DiL Say Likha Huwa, Kahen Aansooun Say Mitaa Huwa.

    Humen Apnay Ghar Say Chalay Huway, Sarr-E-Raah Umar Guzar Gaye..!
    Koi Justajoo Ka Silaa Milaa, Na Safar Ka Haq Hi Adaa Huwa…!~


    Lakin Designing BUhat Umdaa Hai,,,

    Khush Rahen...........





    Last edited by G u L; 06-21-2012 at 01:16 AM.


  3. #3
    Feb 2011
    Lahore, Pakistan
    1,070
    Walykum Salam ..!! Exactly Jo mainay Kahana Tha SP nay Bata Dia Ghazal Puri Nai hai Aur Imla ki bhi Ghaltian Hain.!! Frame Bohat Acha lag Raha hai .!! text behtar kerO yar .. Images b Stretched Hain Sab .!! human image ki Blending Theek Se nai ki .. You Still need alot of improvement..!! Mehnat Kero Pai .!! Soon M Gonna Give You Guyz a Designing Contest .!! So Uskay lye Khud KO Puri Tara Tayyar kero .!! Khush Raho !!

  4. #4
    Nov 2010
    USA
    3,447
    Nice work haroon urdu ki [MENTION=82]L e g e n d[/MENTION] se classes ley ley Joking kafi dino k baad u ne koi kaam share kia hai keep it man n improve ur work like legend said it


    Ƭσʋт ƨα ɢαʏα нαι мɛяι cнαнαтσи κα ωαʝσσ∂

    Aαв κσι αcнα внι ℓαɢɛʏ тʋ нʋм ιʓнαя иαнι κɛятɛ

  5. #5
    Nov 2010
    Cervera, Cataluna, Spain, Spain
    6,419
    [MENTION=1284]Sadpoet[/MENTION] Thanks Yaar I Know Kay Ghazal Puri Nahi Ha Bas Jitni Mughe Mili Thi Mai Nay Share Kardi .. Bas Ahista Ahista Kaam Karuga .. INSHALLAH

    [MENTION=82]L e g e n d[/MENTION] HAa I Know Urdu Ki Galtiya Ha =P Neend May Aisa Hi HOna Tha .. Istelah Kar Dia KAro URdu Ki Galtio Ki Jo JO Bhi HOti Ha .. Ta Kay mAi Usko Agli Dafa Say Sahi Kar Saku .. or Image Konsi Stretch Ha =O ..

    @Mysterious .. Thanks ..

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    Khobsorat Frame work hai Bro ..Image Mixing Main Bihtari Ho sakti the ....Imla Ki Ghaltiyan...2nd Line Lafz Tarekhi Ghalat hai Yahan Tareki Yahni K Andhera Aae ga ...& Poetry Ghazal 7 Lines honey Ki Wajah Se Iska 4th sher Bhi namukamal hai Jis Ki Wajah Se parhney Main Maza Nahi aata ..Baki Nice Idea ... Or jaise jaise ap Design Bnatey Jain Gey Ap K Kam Main Din ba Din Bihtari aati jae ge Khosh Rahain

  7. #7
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    Dec 2010
    UAE
    5,273
    Boht Boht Nice sharing ...

    and designing b bht Alla hai Keep it UP


    O our Lord! Cover (us) with Thy Forgiveness - me, my parents, and (all) Believers, on the Day that the Reckoning will be established!

 

 

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